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Bug 592289 - Trivial typo in Deployment Guide: Chapter 6. Network Configuration
Summary: Trivial typo in Deployment Guide: Chapter 6. Network Configuration
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Deployment_Guide
Version: 6.0
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Douglas Silas
QA Contact: desktop-bugs@redhat.com
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2010-05-14 13:10 UTC by Justin Clift
Modified: 2010-06-22 14:22 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2010-05-14 14:44:44 UTC
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Description Justin Clift 2010-05-14 13:10:31 UTC
Description of problem:

There's a trivial typo in "Chapter 6: Network Configuration" in the online docs (April 2010).  Might as well get it right before it gets to the final release. :)

  http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Deployment_Guide/ch-Network_Configuration.html

  Starts on the 2nd text line. "NetworkManager consists of a core daemon as well as to the GNOME Notification Area applet ..."

As a correction, the "to the" should be "a".

Though it would probably read a bit smoother if the "as well as to the" is instead replaced with "with a matching".

Comment 2 RHEL Product and Program Management 2010-05-14 14:30:27 UTC
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inclusion.

Comment 3 Douglas Silas 2010-05-14 14:44:44 UTC
Thanks for the bug Justin.

I've replaced that gaff with a nice Oxfordian comma-delimeted list of clauses:

"NetworkManager consists of a core daemon, a GNOME Notification Area applet that provides network status information, and graphical configuration tools that can create, edit and remove connections and interfaces."

[master 9ff7024] NetConfig: typo

Comment 4 Justin Clift 2010-05-14 15:35:46 UTC
Cool, that sounds much better. :)


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