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Bug 1059542 - Rewrite segment for clarity
Summary: Rewrite segment for clarity
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: JBoss Data Grid 6
Classification: JBoss
Component: Documentation
Version: 6.2.0
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: CR1
: 6.2.1
Assignee: Mandar Joshi
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2014-01-30 06:04 UTC by Misha H. Ali
Modified: 2015-09-01 02:59 UTC (History)
4 users (show)

Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Environment:
Build Name: 12539, Getting Started Guide-6.2-3 Build Date: 29-01-2014 13:30:43 Topic ID: 9249-571127 [Latest]
Last Closed: 2014-04-04 03:56:42 UTC
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Description Misha H. Ali 2014-01-30 06:04:45 UTC
Selected Text: "The appropriate Server Module handles the communication on the server side and translates the protocol back to the concrete operations performed on the Cache component to store and retrieve data when remotely requested."

Bug Details: Rewrite for clarify. Last part is unclear.

Comment 3 Misha H. Ali 2014-03-05 03:39:23 UTC
Looks OK Mandar. I would just suggest the following minor casing changed:

1. s/Server Module/server module -> server module is a common noun here, I think so it should be lowercase.

2. s/Cache/cache -> Bobb caught this somewhere as well I think. We tend to treat cache as a proper noun when we are really talking about just a common cache, so lowercase would be more appropriate.

Comment 5 Martin Gencur 2014-03-06 12:20:15 UTC
I think it looks fine.


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